i really dig
how you
structured this
excellent imagery
kudos ;)
Hey boyfriend. There’s copper in the jargon
of your back. There’s a swamp made from velvet. I’m talking
about the clutches where your muscles divot, about whittling
a tree trunk frosted over with mud… Or just imagining it:
glass bodies wrestling impressions into the long grass.
Impressions in the fog, peatsmoke on blotting paper. Boyfriend
as smudge. My dreams are set in a pink forest wet with blood mist.
Hey stranger. There’s a base instinct we all love to write about:
the one where you stuff me with fruit and I tear out your stomach.
But it’s so frustrating to feel like an animal and then to see you
at the mosque, the university, you with your friends
as they polish your neck. And then to not see you at all
until the showing. Did you see me from across the window?
Hey baby. Nice shirt. I thought we were hostile but that’s me
wanting it. I swear there’s something deadening the sightlines
though the earth is clear. My love is set in a dream where
my love actually happens. We still don’t talk but while you’re here
come take my jacket off for me. Come take a look.
i really dig
how you
structured this
excellent imagery
kudos ;)
ahaha thank you!! ive been wanting to share poetry for so long and after a while of teeth-grinding im doing it everywhere i can. and i've seen your poetry as well! though i think everything you post counts as poetry really...
keep it up
it's good stuff
ha
thanks
i like
to think
life
is lived
through
verse