That's borderline copyright infringement on my life story! :-)
04:00 p.m.
"I think I've fallen in love with you," I confessed. She laughed. "Do you think you could love me too?" I asked. She shook her head. "No." "Okay."
this reads like a really sad excerpt from a book. are these dreams from your sleep, or....?
either way, i love the flow and way you write this.